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There is a poet among us

Postby Pfc.XavierStash » Mon Feb 04, 2013 4:42 am

I am an avid writer. Be it poetry, or cognitive musing, I enjoy writing. Here is a poem I wrote for my special lady. I hope you guys enjoy and criticism is welcome.

Found

Love is nature in the wild
Untamed and instinctive
When we first met as a child
Conected and free lived
I felt something for you
My finch, my buterfly
Only with intense passion for the truth
We parted,I cry

Lost in life with no torch to see
Blinded and alert
Down the long road I walk and plea
Broken and hurt
I shout and scream to the sky
My heart, it aches
I yell and ask out "Why?"
alive and awake

Out from where you hide
come to me
I hold my arms open wide
you set me free

- Zachary "XavierStash" Harlan
Last edited by Pfc.XavierStash on Tue Feb 05, 2013 5:50 pm, edited 2 times in total.
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Re: There is a poet among us

Postby Lt.Gen.xXHeAdShOtXx » Mon Feb 04, 2013 5:12 am

Nice poem Xavier. :thumbup: It's really well written. :clap:
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Re: There is a poet among us

Postby Pfc.XavierStash » Mon Feb 04, 2013 5:14 am

Thank you HeadShot. I put every ounce of heart and soul I had.
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Re: There is a poet among us

Postby Slaughter » Tue Feb 05, 2013 11:30 am

Wow... Thats really well written.... How do you come up with that? :D
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Re: There is a poet among us

Postby Pfc.XavierStash » Tue Feb 05, 2013 5:47 pm

Cpl.Jezper wrote:Wow... Thats really well written.... How do you come up with that? :D


Inspirations. It is a story about the relationship between me and my girlfriend/future wife. We met in primary grade school, we were best friends, and a year later, I moved away from her. Magically, we reunited on facebook, and it turns out she went to the same college. The rest is history.

Inspiration is a good source for creativity. Everything I write involves details of situations I have experienced. The people I meet, feelings I have, thoughts that cross my mind; I use them all for places for ideas. I will post a prose about envy and jealously later, it will be apparent then.
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Re: There is a poet among us

Postby Capt.AngryWalrus » Wed Jan 29, 2014 10:41 am

I'm glad to know that I'm not the only poet here haha.
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Re: There is a poet among us

Postby Maj.Gen.Asty » Wed Jan 29, 2014 1:10 pm

M/Sgt.AngryWalrus wrote:I'm glad to know that I'm not the only poet here haha.


Considering how old the last post in this thread is, I believe you are. :lol:
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Re: There is a poet among us

Postby Gen.Hannibal » Wed Jan 29, 2014 8:52 pm

Nice
Glad someone around here has some talent.
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