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Re: A new story.

Postby T/Sgt Mr. Pepsi » Sat May 17, 2014 4:51 pm

Great story can't wait to see how it all ends up
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Re: A new story.

Postby S/Sgt.Gatlinggunner1 » Sat May 17, 2014 9:34 pm

Yeah, nice job on keeping with everyone's real combat style!
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Re: A new story.

Postby Maj.Gen.Greenwood (SRO) » Sat May 17, 2014 9:51 pm

Book 2 Chapter 7
The men move in to position to kill the enemy GOA and retrieve any additional Info from the office. By doing this they will get fame,money and almost everthing else they need to live a long life. Gatling,Superman and Adrenaline are at the left door, While Greenwood,Dark and Ace are at the right door. Lastly Pickleman and Roebuck are in the tower watching the two doors to ensure nobody comes in behind their friends.

''3....2.....1...BREACH!'' Orders Adrenaline over the commlinks

The men breach and using their silenced weapons , take out the German and Brazilian soldiers. Upon doing so they attract more attention from the other room. While most are in a firefight, Dark and Ace go into one of the last rooms that need to be cleared. Upon entering Ace gets a knife in the throat causing him to fall down to the ground while Dark pulls up his gun and empties his whole entire clip into the enemy that stabbed his friend.

''Stay with me Ace, Listen to me'' Dark says

''M-m-mommmmmmmmm , mommmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm'' Ace is screaming

Ace is still yelling for his mother, when Dark shoots Ace in the head to put him out of his misery.

The men in the building are all ready to break into the GOAs room.

''Sir, we're at her room. ready to breach'' Adrenaline says over the commlink to Werewolf.

''Good good, proceed with the mission'' Werewolf states.

As the group breach, the GOA is on the large screen TV.

''Hello boys, I'm GOA Fem , I'd like to say great work. I'd figured they'd send some good men for me. Well I'd love to chat, but bye boys'' She states to them

''What is tha- NUKE NUKE! GET OUT OF HERE GOO GO GO!'' Shouts Adrenaline

''Sir we've encoun- BOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOM *Static* '' Greenwood tries to tell Werewolf.

''God damnet , SOMEBODY GET OUT THEIR NOW! MY WHOLE TEAMS DOWN!'' Werewolf yells around the HQ.

''Yes sir, sending in a strike team of Cannafix,Asty,Jersey,Suttonel,Krazykiller and Neckbbreaker'' States X-Mas

''God be with them.......'' Werewolf whispers.
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Hello everybody! sorry for the minor curse by werewolf , but needed something to make this chapter stand out from all the rest!

Also post if you think any survivors will be found / any bodies being found! The winner gets a special sneak peek into Book 3 before it comes out along with a Chapter 1 dedication!
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Re: A new story.

Postby 1st Lt.DZiNE » Sat May 17, 2014 10:09 pm

Awesome, keep up the good work!
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Re: A new story.

Postby Col.Il*Duce » Sat May 17, 2014 11:15 pm

still kind of wondering whether i died...
but an idea: since rubinho and i are brasilians, u could make us defect...
greenwood will be found.
but keep up the writing, looks great
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Re: A new story.

Postby Col.Dark » Sun May 18, 2014 12:22 am

I would have preferred if I put Ace out of his misery Boondock Saints style, while kissing a cross around my neck. ;)

Good story Greenwood!
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Re: A new story.

Postby Gen.Cannafix » Sun May 18, 2014 8:03 am

Gen squad team moving in. :-)
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Re: A new story.

Postby Lt.Gen.Adrenaline » Sun May 18, 2014 9:18 am

At least the mission was a succes, my sacrifice was worth it in the end :)

Good story Green
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Re: A new story.

Postby Maj.Gen.Greenwood (SRO) » Sun May 18, 2014 9:26 am

NOTICE:Hey guys! I'd just like to say thanks for all of the AMAZING support on this, this book only has THREE chapters left, with another one or two coming out today. You have all been great, please say what you want to happen in Book 3 / if you even want a book three.
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Re: A new story.

Postby 1st Lt.Pickleman42 » Sun May 18, 2014 2:00 pm

I feel that if I was actually assigned a mission, I would botch it by tripping on a ladybug or something dumb.
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