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Re: Operation Red Valley

PostPosted: Sat Sep 03, 2016 12:11 pm
by T/Sgt.Harley Quinn
^ same. Please post another chapter soon it's really good :)

Re: Operation Red Valley

PostPosted: Sat Sep 03, 2016 2:24 pm
by Lt.Gen.xXHeAdShOtXx
3 years later you're still killing it with these chapters.

Great work bro, hope you like those chapter title graphics :thumbup:

Re: Operation Red Valley

PostPosted: Mon Nov 21, 2016 6:21 pm
by Lt.Gen.Adrenaline
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After 6 hours of walking, covering a distance of 11 miles platoon 2 found themselves at a river crossing. While Gen.Asty and Gen.Hannibal were discussing whether they were to cross the river now or circle round to a more shallow part, M/Sgt.IL*DUCE stepped towards Brig.Gen.Dave.

M/Sgt.IL*DUCE: “Sir, the men are tired, we need some rest. Could you please give us a 20 minute break?”
Brig.Gen.Dave: “I’ll report back after speaking to the other Generals, but can’t promise anything.”
Brig.Gen.Dave made his way over to the Generals who were planning the actions for the rest of the day. “Permission to interrupt Sir?”
Gen.Hannibal: “Yes Brig.Gen.?”
Brig.Gen.Dave: “The men are all tired and in dire need of some rest, could we not take a break here at the riverside before we move on?”
Gen.Patjeffe: “Look Dave, we know the men are tired but if we don’t get to our destination in the next 3 hours nightfall will cover the land in darkness. We cannot take the risk to move during the nighttime so we’ll have to keep up the pace. In fact, tell the men to be ready we are leaving as we speak.”
Brig.Gen.Dave: “Yes, Sir.”
All the men packed up, with only a few complaining. They all knew nightfall was closing in on them…

Re: Operation Red Valley

PostPosted: Tue Nov 22, 2016 12:44 pm
by 2nd.Lt.Simp. (RO)
The suspense is killing me! Very well done sir, keep it up.

Re: Operation Red Valley

PostPosted: Sun Nov 27, 2016 1:36 am
by Sgt.Artem
Dang, such a good story. Hope to see a new chapter soon

Re: Operation Red Valley

PostPosted: Sun Nov 12, 2017 11:11 am
by Lt.Gen.Adrenaline
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Darkness had fallen and platoon 2 had not reached their destination yet.
Brig.Gen.Asty: “Keep moving men! We’re almost there, less than a mile to go.”
A lot of the soldiers were mumbling, some slightly nervous due to the sudden darkness.
Capt.coffewithner who had taken the lead came running back. “Gen.Asty, I could see lights in the distance. There wasn’t supposed to be anyone at the camp right?”
Gen.Asty: “No. There shouldn’t be. You’re absolutely certain of what you’ve seen?”
Capt.coffewithner: “Affirmative.”

Gen.Asty ordered the platoon to hold position. “Alright everyone, listen up carefully. It seems like we have some unexpected visitors in our camp. We don’t know whether it’s just villagers taking shelter in our camp, Terrorists or even worse… Both. Just to be on the safe side everyone prepare for combat and split up into two groups. Half of you will go with Gen.Patjeffe and Gen.Hannibal and form team Alpha, the other half will stick with me and Gen.NeckBBreaker. and will form team Bravo”

Alpha moved in first from the Southside of the camp, shortly followed by Bravo entering from the East. Lights were still on, but no sign of any intruders.
Alpha was the first to enter the center of the camp after scouting out the Southern and Western area of the camp. No sign of Bravo yet…
Bravo joined Alpha again about 10 minutes later after thoroughly scouting out the Eastern and Northern parts of the camp.
Gen.Hannibal said jokingly: “What took you all so long? We were almost starting to think you fell asleep on your way in here.”
Col.Brandon_ha: “No Sir, we managed to find 4 kids playing in the back of the camp and had to make sure there weren’t any others.”
Gen.Asty: “We’ll let these children go, they don’t mean us no harm. All clear, you are all dismissed.”

Re: Operation Red Valley

PostPosted: Mon Nov 13, 2017 12:45 pm
by 2nd.Lt.Simp. (RO)
Haha, awesome new chapter. Glad you haven't given up on this awesome story. Can't wait for more.

Re: Operation Red Valley

PostPosted: Mon Nov 13, 2017 8:55 pm
by Sgt.Artem
Awesome chapter. Can't wait for a new one. Keep it up!!!